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sherry
Beginner May 2009

Alternative wording to ' and request the pleasure of the company of'

sherry, 19 September, 2008 at 17:03 Posted on Planning 0 10
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It sounds far to wordy for an invitation.

What can be used instead?

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Latest activity by Her Babyship, 22 September, 2008 at 19:46
  • penguin1977
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    penguin1977 ·
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    How about - 'would like to invite you to join in the celebration of'

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  • penguin1977
    Beginner
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    Ooops - still too wordy. Sorry

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  • AliLindsey
    Beginner November 2009
    AliLindsey ·
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    How about Mr and Mrs X would love Mr and Mrs Y to attend the marriage of their daughter ....... and Fred Bloggs on whatever the date is.

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  • sherry
    Beginner May 2009
    sherry ·
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    ? for the replies.

    We are sending the invitations out ourselves (even if it puts my mums nose out of joint)

    So I have put

    Sherry and Mr Sherry

    Would like to invite you to join in the celebration of their marriage,

    etc etc etc

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  • kisses
    Beginner February 2009
    kisses ·
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    Lol i have done exactly the same...i really didnt like request the pleasure...bla, bla. Instead i have done... Mark & Hayley 'warmly invite' Laura & Paul....bla, bla

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  • tahdah
    Beginner September 2009
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    Dear Bob & Maureen

    Come to our wedding

    Love

    Derek & Daphne

    Is that too minimal now ?

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  • M
    Beginner March 2009
    Mrs Bloom ·
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    Ours have a space at the top for the guests names, then it says,

    We're getting married

    On Saturday 7th March 2009

    At Lovely Hotel, Weddingtown

    At 4pm

    With a reception to follow

    We hope you can join us on our special day

    With Love

    Mr Lord & Futuremrslord

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  • bookgirl
    Dedicated June 2007
    bookgirl ·
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    Ours was something like:

    Bookgirl's parents

    are delighted to invite

    guest and guest

    to celebrate the marriage of their daughter

    bookgirl to bookboy

    on ...

    at...

    etc ...

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  • N
    Beginner November 2008
    Nutsy40 ·
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    ..... &..... would be delighted if ........&........ could join them in celebrating their marriage on........ at .........

    Is always a good idea to put RSVP by ....... please

    H x

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    Her Babyship ·
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    Send a text:

    Gettin wed at ____ on date/time. RSVP. No trainers.

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