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warlycarly
Beginner September 2012

Another way to say ' request the pleasure of the company of'?

warlycarly, 11 October, 2011 at 11:59 Posted on Planning 0 6
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As it states really, I am really struggling with my invitation wording. I don't like request the pleasure of the company of' but need something that sounds right when the names of people personally invited. Please help. Sorry to be a pain. ?

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Latest activity by warlycarly, 11 October, 2011 at 12:10
  • ajdown
    VIP September 2011
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    How about

    "whoever the invite is from" would be delighted if "guest name" could join them for the (or "us" and "our" if invite from bride and groom) wedding of B & G ....

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  • warlycarly
    Beginner September 2012
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    We are sending the invitations from ourselves.

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  • warlycarly
    Beginner September 2012
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    Xxx and xxx would be delighted if ......NAME...... could join us in the celebration of our marriage. - Does that sound right?

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  • ForTheLoveOfMrsBrown
    Beginner January 2012
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    We wrote:

    Along with their families, Footlong and Boy would like..........to share the love.

    That might be too informal for you though.

    "Warlycarly and boy would like...........to join them to celebrate their marriage"

    Edit: ha ha, you got there before me!

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  • warlycarly
    Beginner September 2012
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    COULD join us or WOULD join us? which sounds better?

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  • ForTheLoveOfMrsBrown
    Beginner January 2012
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    Would. You are asking "Will you?" not "Can you?".

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  • warlycarly
    Beginner September 2012
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    Yeah, thats what I thought. Thank you both for your help. I might be back though, lol. So watch this space.

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