Can anyone help me with my invite wording please?

Anyone?

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Hi, it actually looks okay to me but maybe you could put the date before the venue, then it will not sound like there are so many'at's', if that makes sense?Also you could try just putting your full names instead of mr and miss. Hope this helps :-)

I don't have access to our invite, but we got the wording off here. Click on Stationery at the top of the page and click example wording.

Thanks surfgirl, its funny cos my OH said there were too many 'at's' too!!

OK Zippy I will have a look at that now!

Thanks peeps!! ?

Hi Lia

Long time no hiching ive been so busy ..... anyway full steam ahead and only 4 months and 3weeks to go, i think your wordings fine but if you wan some inspiration this is ours although its quite formal:

Day Invite:

Mr. & Mrs. ******

Request the pleasure of the company of

**

To celebrate the marriage of their daughter

Kerry-Anne

to

Mr ********

Son of ************

On Saturday 17th July 2010

At One O’Clock in the afternoon

At

******

followed by evening reception

R.S.V.P by the 1st May 2010

Evening Invite

Mr. and Mrs. ****

Request the pleasure of

*****

At an after dinner evening reception,

following the marriage of their daughter

Kerry-Anne

to

Mr *****

Son of Mr. & Mrs. ****

On Saturday 17th July 2010

At Six O’Clock in the evening

At

******

R.S.V.P by the 1st May 2010