Favours

Thats lovely i have homemade wine charm and bought thank you scrolls from ebay tied with ribbon yours is more personal its lovely x

The last line of your poem doesn't scan properly - it has too many syllables. That aside it's very sweet.

Personally I don't understand the point of wine charms, but if you like them then do it.

Know what Helenia means about the last line, it'd sound better if it said 'as a token of our love, it's our way of thanking you'

but that's kinda a strong statement to say 'love' IYKWIM!

but that sort of thing.

Overall tho I really like it ?

Oooh yeah, I see what you mean.

How about:

When all the plates are cleared & the speeches have been read
The first dance has been danced & the last tear has been shed
Please take home this wine charm; a gift from bride and groom
For joining in our special day, it’s our way of thanking you.

In reference to wedding favors information in online, from what I understand from other threads you give one per guest. A friend of mine told me that if it is a personal favor like chocolate, a little bottle of wine etc. You'll give one favor per guest no matter what the favor since you may have guests.