opinions on my invites please?

I don't think they are rubbish, far from it. I love the colours and the design. The only thing I would say is they might be a little flat. I don't know if you're planning to include more information and perhaps an RSVP card, in which case you could build it into a little pack with a belly band or ribbon/twine tie to give them some depth. Are you planning to put anything on the reverse? To me I like just a little something on the reverse as this gives a better quality look.

On a proof read look though Parents should be parents. I also think the join in celebrating sounds wrong, perhaps join them in celebrating, or join them as they celebrate

But I like them.

These look great, love the font & the bunting.

Have you tried using a different colour for the font? The black may be a bit harsh against the pastels. I'd also reduce the weight of your ........... line where you'll write the names.

I love the colours!

I think theyre lovely, however I agree that the dotted line looks a little bit heavy! I'd also move the 'together with their parents' down a tad just so they arent covering the flowers.

Also, do you need to hand write the names on the front? I just think it creates a lot of work for you and unless you have amazingly neat handwriting it may start to look a bit fussy - As long as you write the names of each guest on the envelopes you wont need to worry about people not knowing who is invited!

Anywhoo - just my personal opinion (don't shoot me!)- They are pretty as they are though!