Please could you proof read my website

Some nice dog shots!

I'd recognise that godawful register office anywhere ?

Isn't jewelry spelt jewellery?

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Hi Boz,

Its looks great.

I've read through everything and as far as I can see there is no more typo's etc.

Good luck with everything

Victoria

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Oh and website looks fine too ?

Just while I remember, did I remember correctly that you were thinking about hiring out studio time on an ad hoc basis?

WSS I think the other is US maybe is it?

Boz

There are still quite a few full stops missing all over the place, a space after a comma on the home page and where you are putting measurements of prints, PLEASE put in the units of measurement (the page with the mother and baby thing).

(I do understand - I edit and manage our company's website and it's often hard to see the wood for the trees when you're working on it all day! Nothing puts me off a website more than typos and missing punctuation - it looks very unprofessional).

I was about to point that one out too.

Who is the woman with the lip-liner? ?

its done under weddings needs it's

I'd call specila offer - special offers as there are more than on. upto need a cap U in the first one and separate the up and to. I think techincally Valentines should be Valentine's as it belongs to St. Valentine

Missed that one. Area's finest location? Hockley? Behave ?

I have a couple of comments, but would rather email you (hmm, that sounds random, I have a photography studio so it's not as random as it sounds).

Do you want me to just use the contact page on the site?

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Sorry about all my typos in my responses btw, hope they help. I think it's a cute website!

You need a space between the comma after promotional and architecture on the front page title.

About Us

Shouldnt customers needs have a ' after customers. I wouldnt capatalise formal and reportage.

Weddings

I would change single sex weddings to civil partnerships

Special offer

Change to offers. Upto should be up to. I would also change 1 to one as I dont like the way it looks beside 12x8.

Oh thank you thank you I have written all these down and will put right asap, it just after a while looking at something you start to see something else lol,

as for areas finest and Hockley, well i couldnt but one of Birminghams less attractive areas could I ? but i do know what you mean

and to the one who asked whos the lady with the lip liner ITS ACTULLY A MAN ? I do a lot of promo shots for the local drag artists

and yes it is me who hires the studio out adhoc

cheers me dears x

Great site, I think it looks really good - I really like the 'look' of it, it's very cool. The only thing I would say is that I think having a mobile phone number spoils it a bit, I do like to see a landline number. It's just a personal thing, I guess I think mobiles can look a bit unprofessional (if thats the only contact number)!

I'll take that as a 'no thanks' then ?

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Hiya

Sorry Lois thought Id replied to you

It would be great thank you and yes you can use the contact page

Hi, have done so

L
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Oh god, I'm such a po faced old bag, but I'd be totally put off a photographer by the photo of the boy posing with a gun. I'd instantly think "I don't want them photographing my wedding/family" maybe I'm the only one, or you specialise in taking pics of wannabe gangstas, but...

Ummm, I wouldn't book you to do my wedding based on those wedding pictures I'm afraid, the studio ones are better, the B & G don't look their best. Sorry but that's just my opinion which probably doesn't mean much to most <shrugs>