What do you think of this?

I think its lovely!

Ah that's brilliant I love it!!!! Such a good idea - im trying to think of poems/readings that are that sort of style for our day, thats so cute!

Not for me i'm afaid - we hated anything that rhymed or talked about marriage being something you had to work on - which pretty much is all of them! ?

Having said that - for a 9 year old to read, I can kinda see how it could work. Afterall, I couldn't imagine a 9 year old reading anything "too old" sounding (IYGWIM)

It's not quite my cup of tea, but for a 9 yr old cd be ok.

Only please change the wannas to want to!

Saracroft had the original musical version just after they signed the register at her wedding which was good. Not loving it as a poem though sorry.

Love it!!?

OH loves this film, we're thinking of having it somewhere in out ceremony so I think it's sweet.

I'm saying yes but only because i want the song somewhere in my wedding. x

I love it as a song, but I think it loses something as a reading... sorry! x

Im on the fence. I really like it but actually dont think its right for 9 yr old and shouldnt it be for one person to say to another?!

My friend has given me a reading her son did.

On your Wedding Day

Today is a day you will always remember
the greatest in anyones life
You'll start the day off just two people in love
and end it as husband and wife.

Its a brand new beginning the start of a journey
with moments to cherish and treasure
and although there'll be times when you both disagree
these will surely be outweighed by pleasure

You'll have heard many words of advice in the past
when the secrets of marriage were spoken
but you know that the answers lie hidden inside
where the bond of true love lies unbroken

So live happy forever as lovers and friends
its the dawn of a new life for you
as you stand together with love in your eyes
from the moment you whisper 'i do'

And with luck, all your hopes, and your dreams can be real
may success find its way to your hearts
tomorrow can bring you the greatest of joys
but today is the day it all starts.

Thats the reading that i read out at a friends wedding......i cant see a kid getting his mouth around some of the words though without a stumble or two in the scanning of it all.....

as for the adam sandler....... hmm, not keen for a kid to read about the line 'putting you to bed when you've had too much to drink...' thats just me though...