would it be naughty....? UPDATED FOR HELP WITH LOGO PLEASE

go for it!

i'd like to help too...

linda x

i will help

Hi Lisa

I'll help too! x

Thanks guys, I'll edit my OP. xx

i prefer the second one xxx

I like number 2 best.

Prefer the first one without the swirls but also without the flower in name iyswim!

Hi Lisa

I prefer the second one as it looks "cleaner" but maybe with the hibiscus flowers moved from the end of the tendrils to nearer the name and text but still placed within the flourish design IYSWIM. When they are hanging from the end of the tendrils they look too "heavy" to me. Edited to explain: the flowers draw my eyes down the logo

I like the second one best. xx

Number two - it just looks neater - the flower in the first looks a bit odd.....

No 1 for me!

The second one. It's looks more balanced.

Hi

I prefer 1, as the flowers on the end on 2 draw the eye from your name.

Another vote for the second, but they are both pretty!

I like the second one but think the flowers need to be moved up so the design isn't quite as long, you could also add a few more flowers in on the ends of a few of the tendrils on each side if that makes sense?

Oh gosh - I like them both (what a lovely design - what did you use to create it?!) ..... I think I prefer the 2nd one but agree the small flowers do draw the eye away. Could you maybe put the two small hibis above where it says 'beautiful handcrafted jewellery'? then the eye will be naturally drawn down thru' the centre of the logo from the name down, ending at what it is you actually make?

Or maybe in the middle where the line of the swirls start either side of 'designs'...

-----* Designs *-------

Just a thought.

Lisa, If I can be of any help with the logo design you're welcome to give me a shout xxx

I'm still struggling to decide but I think I prefer the name with the flower but with the first lot swirals as they are smaller and I agree with the others about the flowers being too bottom heavy and drawing your eye down.

Just another thought to add to the confusion. Is the whole logo going on your front page of the website? I think it will look too busy with everything else on your front page so just keep that in mind whilst choosing your final logo as you don't want to end up realising it won't fit nicely or something.

Sorry I've only just got back to this.

Thanks for all your suggestions. I think I will try out a few more where the little flowers are more incoporated into the swirls rather than just on the ends to see what that is like. I don't like that the logo is so big but I'm struggling a bit with the swirls.

Lyns - I will be re-jigging the whole front page once the new logo is on as there will be too much going on otherwise.

x

I love them both but I think the second one gets my vote.

I like the second one but like others have said I think the flowers need moving up a bit. How about putting them at the end of the swirl that is nearest the name and creates a circle, both sides have the same circle so would enclose the flower and have it quite prominent

I like the second one. It'll be no surprise that I don't agree with the others about the two flowers, I like them where they are. It looks neat and balanced to me and wonder <patronising icon> are they drawing they eye away because people knew to look for them </patronising icon>

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Both are nice but I prefer number 1.

i like them both too....makes me want to reconsider mine...lol.

both are great.....and any of them will look great on your website imho.....

linda x

Number one for me.

Number 2 for me!

And I liked the flowers where they are too. I think the "beautiful handmade jewellery" is a little too small though.

Hi

I took a moment whilst having a juick sarnie in between making a website for a client and going head on into a pile of editing, and threw these together for you to give ou 2 totally different moods

and

enjoy

Richard King

Hi Lisa, I like number 1 , but instead of the flower shading in the O I would put it just underneath 'DESIGNS' - maybe at the right hand underside of 'DESIGNS' so it looks like its trailing off it x

I like number 1, but without the two bottom side scrolly bits. I think it's too much going on. You have the scrolly bit in the font, and the flower in the name,, so I'd leave the scrolly bits for use on the site used in another way, but not on the logo. Or maybe have the scrolly bits half the size they are currently.

Glad to see that orange is still the new black

I like both, although thay are abit busy, but you do need to think how the design integrates with everythibng else.. website, headded notepaper, printed documents, signwriting on the van, shop frontage

Although you might not use all of the above, a good logo will work in all those environments, and if you ever expand, you will not be back to square one

You also need to think about your target audience.. brides might like something fluffy, older people and men might not... also, if you go for a business to bussiness (selling to a hotel chain for example) you might want to consider something a little more formal

Richard