Groom speech feedback

Absolutely perfect!!

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Thank you Sarah, appreciate that has helped boost my confidence

That's lovely - short, sweet and full of meaning. Perfect.

Sounds great to me

Sounds perfect, would be very happy if this was my fiancé’s speech

I agree, all perfect! The toast at the end is really lovely. Spot on

It’s nice but is there any way you can add in one or two personal things about your wife or your relationship? Although there is nothing wrong with it, I would be a little bit disappointed that it feels like could have come from anybody. No need to get rid of anything just maybe add in a few things a bit more personal?

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Thank you everyone for the great feedback really appreciate it!

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How is this for personalisation?

Thanks for the feedback appreciate it.

On behalf of my wife and I, we’d like to thank you all for being here today to celebrate this special day with us. You all being here means the world to us, and we are grateful for your love and support.

*Bride's name redacted*, my heart overflows with joy and love for you. From the moment we met, I knew there was something special about you. You've shown me what true friendship, support, happiness, and love mean. You complete me in every way, and I never knew what was missing in my life before I met you.

We have had so many amazing and unforgettable times together. Throughout our journey, I am reminded that *Bride's name redacted* is not only the love of my life but also an amazing golf partner. Just as you've stood by me on the course, you've stood by my side in every adventure and challenge we've faced together. You make every moment, whether on the golf course or in our everyday lives, more special.

Please raise your glasses to my beautiful wife, to a lifetime of love, happiness, and endless adventures together.

Cheers!

I think that’s much better!

To be honest, I prefer the original version. But either will be fine - most people just want to hear the groom saying something sweet about the bride, and either of these speeches fit the bill.

Just a little heads up. As this is a public forum anyone can see it including your future bride and you have included enough info for her to link it to you.

Grooms speeches usually start with thanking the guests then something about both sets of parents (if applicable ) also adding in a toast or a thought to those who are no longer with us then lastly move on to the bride perhaps starting with how you met and then add something funny about her to lighten the speech a little then move on to the loverly part to end with.

But its your speech your wedding and you should do it the way you feel, there are no real "norms". Hopefully she would think it really sweet that you wanted to get it so right that you reached out for help in writing it but for me I wouldn't feel comfortable if my other half was to see it beforehand.

Maybe have the replies here sent to you via personal message instead.

This sounds great! Very heartfelt and I personally think the ending is really lovely. You can always thank people for coming and celebrating with you in there but don’t sweat it, you’ll be great!

I think you need to thank your groomsmen your in-laws, parents ,complement the bridesmaids and say how beautiful your wife looks . Hope that helps