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lisaanne
Beginner April 2012

Invitation and extra info wording - please check!

lisaanne, 8 January, 2012 at 17:14 Posted on Planning 0 1

Hi all

I am just about to print our invitations and I'm paranoid that I'm going to print them wrong with a big spelling error or not sounding right or something! I would be so grateful if you could just have a quick look and let me know any suggestions.

Here is my day invite wording:

(Groom name)
And
(Bride name)
Would like to invite
GUESTS NAME
to join them at their wedding
On Thursday 26th April 2012
At (Church name and full address)
At 1pm
And afterwards to celebrate at
(Reception venue name and full address)

(Groom name)
And
(Bride name)
Would like to invite
GUESTS NAME
to join them at their wedding
On Thursday 26th April 2012
At (Church name and full address)
At 1pm
And afterwards to celebrate at
(Reception venue name and full address)

This looks really bare on the paper, should I put any other info on the invite itself??

Then I will have a folded info sheet as follows:

The wedding of (Groom) and (Bride) - Thursday 26 April 2012

Our wedding website

We have set up a wedding website containing all the information on here plus some extras! The website can be found at ... and the password is ...

Church

Please arrive for 12:45, the ceremony begins at 1pm. There is parking to the side and rear of the church.

Reception

--- Hotel is around 5 miles, or a 15 minute drive from the church and there is ample parking. Directions can be found on our wedding website or please contact us for further details.

Accommodation

We would love guests to stay over at --- where possible, however rooms are limited. If you would like to book a room at the hotel, please let us know and we will check availability.

Alternatively, there are other hotels nearby. Please see our website for details or ask us.

Gifts

Your presence on our day is gift enough, however if you would like to get us something, we would be grateful of any contribution towards our honeymoon fund. If you would prefer to get us a gift, we have a small gift list with John Lewis.

Our gift list will open on 15th March. You can purchase from it by visiting www.johnlewisgiftlist.com, calling 0845 600 2202 or visiting a John Lewis store. Please quote our gift list number – ....

RSVP

Please let us know whether or not you will be able to attend by Saturday 10th March 2012.

We would love you to respond online using our wedding website as detailed above. The RSVP password is ----. Alternatively, you can call (bride) on ..... or (Groom) on ...., or write to us at ....

However you RSVP, please let us know if you have any dietary requirements.

Grateful of any thoughts/comments!

1 replies

Latest activity by lisaanne, 8 January, 2012 at 17:58
  • SassyT
    Beginner August 2013
    SassyT ·
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    I think that's lovely!

    RSVP bit might be a bit wordy though

    RSVP by dd/mm/yy by any the following ways:

    Online: _info here_

    Phone: _brides number_ or _grooms number_

    Address: _your address_

    Please include any dietary requirements.

    I don't think there's any need to include 'whether or not you will be able to attend' simply asking for an RSVP should suffice Smiley smile


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  • lisaanne
    Beginner April 2012
    lisaanne ·
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    Thanks for the feedback, I agree with you on the RSVP part actually, will change!

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